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читать дальшеThere were three sisters. One of them got merry really successful and became Lady Bertram, who lived in a wealthy estate, which was called Mansfield Park. Her sister married her husband’s friend Mr. Norris, who had not any private fortune, but Sir Thomas Bertram gave him an income in the living of Mansfield Park. The third sister married to disoblige her family and became a wife of a sailor without education and fortune. Mrs. Price and her sisters quarreled and didn’t talk during eleven years. But one day Mrs. Norris said that their sister was waiting for a ninth child, her husband was a drunker and she was very poor. Lady Bertram was the richest among the sisters and Mrs. Norris suggested taking one of sister’s children and bringing him or her up. They chose a girl Fanny of ten years old and bring her to Mansfield Park. A girl was small, with a pale complexion, very timid and shy, but she was really nice. In comparison with Fanny her cousins were fine, the sons of sixteen and seventeen were very well-looking and the daughters of twelve and thirteen were handsome and all of them had a great education and manners for their age. A girl shamed of her appearance and missed her family, she was afraid of everybody. After a few months she felt more comfortable, because first of all her cousin Edmund became her friend and she began to know more things and people at Mansfield Park.
Lady Bertram didn’t care of her children, only Mrs. Norris and a governess. The eldest son grew carefree and extravagant; the others gave only good emotions, parents were proud of them. Sir Thomas continued to help Mrs. Price with other children too. One time Fanny even was happy to see her elder brother William who visited her before he became a sailor.
The governess taught her French and read the History for her. Edmund still was the only friend for her. He advised her books which it was better to read and developed her taste and mind. They discussed all the books she had read.
The first important event in the family was the death of Mr. Norris. Sir Thomas Bertram hoped that Mrs. Norris would take their niece now, because as he believed she dreamed about it from the beginning, but the illness of Mr. Norris disturbed her. There was no hindrance now, but he had a mistake his sister in law didn’t plan to share her house with a niece and waste own money for her.
The living was for Edmund, but his brother Tom was so extravagant that they were forced to give the living to a new clergyman. The Grants arrived at the parsonage. They were quite nice and sociable, but not without some disadvantages.
After a year Mr. Bertram and his eldest son had to leave England for business, because they had some money problems. Edmund decide everything at Mansfield Park at that period.
The winter came and passed. The Miss Bertrams began to go into public, Fanny didn’t share festivals of the season, and she was Lady Bertram’s companion at home. Mrs. Norris tried to organize her niece’s life. During the season she found a fiancé for Maria Bertram who was elder. Mr. Rushworth was stricken with Maria’s beauty and believed that he fell in love with her. Actually he was dull, but he had common sense and had nothing disagreeable. Maria Bertram was twenty one years old and she was happy to be engaged with him.
In the middle of June when Fanny had just reached her eighteen year brother and sister of Mrs. Grant a Mr. and Miss Crawford came. They stayed there as guests of their sister for a long time. Young people made friends rather quickly. Mrs. Grant and Mrs. Norris planed to engage Mr. Crawford and Julia Bertram. And also they supposed to have such a math as Tom Bertram and Miss Crawford.
During innumerous walks, trips and parties we could see that the pairs could be changed, nothing was as definite as old ladies thought. Mr. Crawford had nice talks with the eldest Miss Bertrams too regardless of her engagement. Miss Crawford began to spend a lot of time with Edmund when Tom left England for business again.
First of all young people visited Sezerton, Mr. Rushworth’s estate on purpose to find faults which it was necessary to improve later. In Sozerton we saw episodes where Edmund and Miss Crawford left Fanny for an hour and we walking alone and also when Maria with help of Mr. Crawford crossed locked gate in the garden instead of waiting of waiting for Mr. Rushworth who would bring a key.
The Bertram’s were waiting for their father, but a few months before they organized a ball at Mansfield, because Tom’s friend Mr. John Yates came and they could have five pairs.
читать дальшеThere were three sisters. One of them got merry really successful and became Lady Bertram, who lived in a wealthy estate, which was called Mansfield Park. Her sister married her husband’s friend Mr. Norris, who had not any private fortune, but Sir Thomas Bertram gave him an income in the living of Mansfield Park. The third sister married to disoblige her family and became a wife of a sailor without education and fortune. Mrs. Price and her sisters quarreled and didn’t talk during eleven years. But one day Mrs. Norris said that their sister was waiting for a ninth child, her husband was a drunker and she was very poor. Lady Bertram was the richest among the sisters and Mrs. Norris suggested taking one of sister’s children and bringing him or her up. They chose a girl Fanny of ten years old and bring her to Mansfield Park. A girl was small, with a pale complexion, very timid and shy, but she was really nice. In comparison with Fanny her cousins were fine, the sons of sixteen and seventeen were very well-looking and the daughters of twelve and thirteen were handsome and all of them had a great education and manners for their age. A girl shamed of her appearance and missed her family, she was afraid of everybody. After a few months she felt more comfortable, because first of all her cousin Edmund became her friend and she began to know more things and people at Mansfield Park.
Lady Bertram didn’t care of her children, only Mrs. Norris and a governess. The eldest son grew carefree and extravagant; the others gave only good emotions, parents were proud of them. Sir Thomas continued to help Mrs. Price with other children too. One time Fanny even was happy to see her elder brother William who visited her before he became a sailor.
The governess taught her French and read the History for her. Edmund still was the only friend for her. He advised her books which it was better to read and developed her taste and mind. They discussed all the books she had read.
The first important event in the family was the death of Mr. Norris. Sir Thomas Bertram hoped that Mrs. Norris would take their niece now, because as he believed she dreamed about it from the beginning, but the illness of Mr. Norris disturbed her. There was no hindrance now, but he had a mistake his sister in law didn’t plan to share her house with a niece and waste own money for her.
The living was for Edmund, but his brother Tom was so extravagant that they were forced to give the living to a new clergyman. The Grants arrived at the parsonage. They were quite nice and sociable, but not without some disadvantages.
After a year Mr. Bertram and his eldest son had to leave England for business, because they had some money problems. Edmund decide everything at Mansfield Park at that period.
The winter came and passed. The Miss Bertrams began to go into public, Fanny didn’t share festivals of the season, and she was Lady Bertram’s companion at home. Mrs. Norris tried to organize her niece’s life. During the season she found a fiancé for Maria Bertram who was elder. Mr. Rushworth was stricken with Maria’s beauty and believed that he fell in love with her. Actually he was dull, but he had common sense and had nothing disagreeable. Maria Bertram was twenty one years old and she was happy to be engaged with him.
In the middle of June when Fanny had just reached her eighteen year brother and sister of Mrs. Grant a Mr. and Miss Crawford came. They stayed there as guests of their sister for a long time. Young people made friends rather quickly. Mrs. Grant and Mrs. Norris planed to engage Mr. Crawford and Julia Bertram. And also they supposed to have such a math as Tom Bertram and Miss Crawford.
During innumerous walks, trips and parties we could see that the pairs could be changed, nothing was as definite as old ladies thought. Mr. Crawford had nice talks with the eldest Miss Bertrams too regardless of her engagement. Miss Crawford began to spend a lot of time with Edmund when Tom left England for business again.
First of all young people visited Sezerton, Mr. Rushworth’s estate on purpose to find faults which it was necessary to improve later. In Sozerton we saw episodes where Edmund and Miss Crawford left Fanny for an hour and we walking alone and also when Maria with help of Mr. Crawford crossed locked gate in the garden instead of waiting of waiting for Mr. Rushworth who would bring a key.
The Bertram’s were waiting for their father, but a few months before they organized a ball at Mansfield, because Tom’s friend Mr. John Yates came and they could have five pairs.
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09.11.2008 в 19:58Mrs. Price and her sisters quarreled and didn’t talk for eleven years. But one day Mrs. Norris said that her sister was waiting for a ninth child, her husband was a drunker and she was very poor. Lady Bertram was the richest of the sisters and Mrs. Norris suggested taking one of sister’s children and bringing him or her up.
They chose a girl Fanny, ten years old, and brought her to Mansfield Park. A girl was small, with pale face, very timid and shy, but really nice. In comparison with Fanny her cousins were fine, the sons of sixteen and seventeen were very good-looking and the daughters of twelve and thirteen were handsome. All of them had a great education and manners for their age. A girl was ashamed of her appearance and missed her family, she was afraid of everybody. After a few months she felt more comfortable, because one of her cousins Edmund became her friend. She began to know more things and people at Mansfield Park.
Lady Bertram didn’t care of her children, only Mrs. Norris and a governess did. The eldest son grew carefree and extravagant; the others brought only good emotions, parents were proud of them. Sir Thomas continued to help Mrs. Price with other children too. Once Fanny was happy to see her elder brother William who came to visit her before he becomes a sailor.
The governess taught her French and read the History for her. Edmund still remaines the only friend for her. He advised her books which it was better to read and developed her taste and mind. They discussed all the books she had read.
The first important event in the family was the death of Mr. Norris. Sir Thomas Bertram hoped that Mrs. Norris would take their niece now, because as he believed she dreamed about it from the beginning, but the illness of Mr. Norris disturbed her. There was no hindrance now, but he had a mistake his sister in law didn’t plan to share her house with a niece and waste own money for her.
The living was for Edmund, but his brother Tom was so extravagant that they were forced to give the living to a new clergyman. The Grants arrived at the parsonage. They were quite nice and sociable, but not without some disadvantages.
After a year Mr. Bertram and his eldest son had to leave England for business, because they had some money problems. Edmund decide everything at Mansfield Park at that period.
The winter came and passed. The Miss Bertrams began to go into public, Fanny didn’t share festivals of the season, and she was Lady Bertram’s companion at home. Mrs. Norris tried to organize her niece’s life. During the season she found a fiancé for Maria Bertram who was elder. Mr. Rushworth was stricken with Maria’s beauty and believed that he fell in love with her. Actually he was dull, but he had common sense and had nothing disagreeable. Maria Bertram was twenty one years old and she was happy to be engaged with him.
In the middle of June when Fanny had just reached her eighteen year brother and sister of Mrs. Grant a Mr. and Miss Crawford came. They stayed there as guests of their sister for a long time. Young people made friends rather quickly. Mrs. Grant and Mrs. Norris planed to engage Mr. Crawford and Julia Bertram. And also they supposed to have such a math as Tom Bertram and Miss Crawford.
During innumerous walks, trips and parties we could see that the pairs could be changed, nothing was as definite as old ladies thought. Mr. Crawford had nice talks with the eldest Miss Bertrams too regardless of her engagement. Miss Crawford began to spend a lot of time with Edmund when Tom left England for business again.
First of all young people visited Sezerton, Mr. Rushworth’s estate on purpose to find faults which it was necessary to improve later. In Sozerton we saw episodes where Edmund and Miss Crawford left Fanny for an hour and we walking alone and also when Maria with help of Mr. Crawford crossed locked gate in the garden instead of waiting of waiting for Mr. Rushworth who would bring a key.
The Bertram’s were waiting for their father, but a few months before they organized a ball at Mansfield, because Tom’s friend Mr. John Yates came and they could have five pairs.
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09.11.2008 в 20:26Насколько я поняла, здесь нужно было менять не столько грамматику, сколько в целом отредактировать текст после электронного переводчика.
Фактически - ошибки в употреблении лексики, в порядке слов в предложении, в общей нагроможденности фраз. Я сделала некоторые предложения более короткими - разбила их на несколько, то, что изменила - где была необходимость в этом - выделила оффтопом.
Удачи!
At first (in the beginning) there were three sisters. One of them got merry really successful and became Lady Bertram, who lived in a wealthy estate, called Mansfield Park. Her sister married her husband’s friend Mr. Norris, who didn't have any private fortune, but Sir Thomas Bertram gave him an income in the living of Mansfield Park. (если имелось в виду дал возможность, дал деньги - gave him an opportunity to live in Mansfield Park) The third sister married to disoblige her family and became a wife of a sailor without any education and fortune.
Mrs. Price and her sisters quarreled and didn’t talk for eleven years. But one day Mrs. Norris said that her sister was waiting for a ninth child, her husband was a drunker and she was very poor. Lady Bertram was the richest of the sisters and Mrs. Norris suggested taking one of sister’s children and bringing him or her up.
They chose a girl Fanny, ten years old, and brought her to Mansfield Park. A girl was small, with pale face, very timid and shy, but really nice. In comparison with Fanny her cousins were fine, the sons of sixteen and seventeen were very good-looking and the daughters of twelve and thirteen were handsome. All of them had a great education and manners for their age. A girl was ashamed of her appearance and missed her family, she was afraid of everybody. After a few months she felt more comfortable, because one of her cousins Edmund became her friend. She began to know more things and people at Mansfield Park.
Lady Bertram didn’t care of her children, only Mrs. Norris and a governess did. The eldest son grew carefree and extravagant; the others brought only good emotions, parents were proud of them. Sir Thomas continued to help Mrs. Price with other children too. Once Fanny was happy to see her elder brother William who came to visit her before he becomes a sailor.
The governess taught her French and read the History for her. Edmund still remained her only friend. He advised her books which were better to read and developed her taste and mind. They discussed all the books she had read.
The first important event in the family was the death of Mr. Norris. Sir Thomas Bertram hoped that Mrs. Norris would take their niece then. He believed she dreamed about it for a long time, but the illness of Mr. Norris disturbed (раздражало? лучше сказать kept her from doing that - не давало ей этого сделать)her.
There were no obstacles then, but he was wrong - his sister-in-law wasn't planning to share her house with a niece and to spend her own money for the girl.
The living was for Edmund, but his brother Tom was so extravagant that they were forced to give the living to a new clergyman. The Grants arrived at the parsonage. They were quite nice and sociable, but with some failings.
After a year Mr. Bertram and his eldest son had to leave England for business, as they had some problems with money. Edmund was the head of Mansfield Park during that period.
The winter came and passed. Miss Bertrams began to appear in the society, Fanny didn’t share festivals of the season, and she was Lady Bertram’s companion at home. Mrs. Norris tried to organize her niece’s life. During the season she found a fiance for Maria Bertram who was the elder. Mr. Rushworth was stricken with Maria’s beauty and believed that he fell in love with her. Actually he was dull, but he had common sense and had nothing disagreeable. Maria Bertram was twenty one and happy to be engaged with him.
In the middle of June when Fanny had just reached her eighteen anniversary? Mrs. Grant's brother and sister, Mr. and Miss Crawford, came. They stayed there for a long time. Young people became friends rather quickly. Mrs. Grant and Mrs. Norris planed to engage Mr. Crawford and Julia Bertram. They also shared the idea to make Tom Bertram and Miss Crawford s couple.
During the numerous walks, trips and parties we could see that the pairs have changed, and nothing was as definite as old ladies thought. Mr. Crawford had nice talks with the eldest Miss Bertrams, who was too regardless of her engagement. Miss Crawford began to spend a lot of time with Edmund when Tom left England for business again.
First of all the young people visited Sezerton, Mr. Rushworth’s estate to find faults which were necessary to improve later. In Sezerton we see the episodes where Edmund and Miss Crawford left Fanny for an hour walking alone. Maria also crossed the locked gate in the garden with help of Mr. Crawford without waiting for Mr. Rushworth to bring a key.
The Bertrams were waiting for their father, but a few months before they organized a ball at Mansfield, as Mr. John Yates, a friend of Tom, came and they could have five pairs
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09.11.2008 в 22:37Сейчас прочитаю.
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09.11.2008 в 22:42